[전화영어 영작공부] advantages and disadvantages of technology

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advantages and disadvantages of technology.

After developed many technology, we have been living easy life.  We can sharing our life in time and listen music everywhere. 
Using SNS we can meet people and see the other side of world. we can learn and experience many things at home or in cafe. It is really good because learning and experiencing many things used to cost a lot so that many poor people can not do it but now they can. 

But, there is a word "Two sides of the same coin". developed technology has a bad thing as well. there is a some example.
There is some problem from that we can solve our problem at home so we loose our chance that meet and conversation with other person because we can do almost things using laptop so We just choose what i will buy and click that.
There is someone who addicted with electronic things. they  are always watching their smartphone or laptop even if there are with other people. Because they keep in touch with other people in time so they can not focus on people who are with in real life.

In my opinion, before using new development we need to study about how to using it without overwhelmed with it. many scholar need to study it and make a report therefore we can avoid that situation. and we try to make a balance with old life style and new life style. 

Correct (2016.10.13)

Advantages and Disadvantages of Technology.

After developing many technology, we have been living easily.  We can share our thoughts through social media and listen to music anywhere. 

Using social media, we can meet people and see the other side of the world. We can learn and experience many things at home or in cafe. It is really good because learning and experiencing many things used to cost a lot so that many poor people can not do it before but now they can. 

But, there is a phrase "Two sides of the same coin". developed technology has a bad thing as well. there are some examples.

There are some problems from developing technology that we can solve at home so we lose our chance to meet and converse with other person because we can almost do it using laptop so we just choose what we want to buy and click that.

There is someone who is addicted with electronic things. They  are always using their smartphones or laptops even if they are with other people. Because they keep in touch with other people at the same time so they can not focus on who are with them at the moment.

In my opinion, before using new development we need to study about how to use it without overwhelming with it. Many researchers need to study about it and make a report so that we can avoid that situation. And we try to make a balance with old life style and new life style.

1. anywhere : 모든장소중 내가 특정 장소를 택해서 행동할 때 ,  everywhere : 그냥 모든 장소
    - every는 정말 모든 , any는 모두이지만 그중 특정 
2. SNS 보단 social media  , 아마 외국사람들 못알아들을것임. 
3. the world 
4. there is/are : some 이나 alot이 뒤에 붙을때는 are로!!
5. loose 는 옷이 늘어나는 등의 늘어나는것, lose 는 잃어버리다. 
6. conversation 은 명사 converce 동사. 

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