[전화영어 영작] family

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Family. 
 
When people talking about familly, they are normally image one type of family that consisted of a old man and woman and thier child. Because society allow one type of family. But, even if we can not noticed there is other type of that, it is.For example single momther family, single father family, gay family etc. In the world ther are variety of people who have a diffrent experience so that it's nature that there are variety of type of family. 

In my opinion, Family is not made of blood, but consideration. because there is a lot of bad case of family that made of blood. most that is good but some make a big problem. they kill their biological parent or child. because of they suffer from heavy stress from their parent or child. For example, after given birth a woman feel depressed. Because her life getting totally diffrent from before and she can not except well. during suffer from deprees nobody help her.  there is other example. after a man failure his bussiness, he need a  big money, so he asked his parent give him  a money. but they didn't. so he get upset and killed them.

So family always take care each other and consider themselves. 

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Family.

When people are talking about familly, they normally think of one type of family that consists of father, mother and their child/children. Because society allows one type of family. But, even if we can not notice there is other type of that. For example single mother family, single father family, gay family etc. In the world there are varieties of people who have different experiences so that it's nature that there are many types of family.

In my opinion, Family is not only made of blood, but consideration. Because there are a lot of bad cases of families that are made of blood. Most of families can solve their problems easily but others make it worse. They kill their biological parents or child. Because they suffer from stress from their parents or child. For example, after giving birth, a woman feels depressed. Because her life is getting totally diffrent from before and she can not accept well. During depression, nobody helps her.  There is other example. After a man failed on his bussiness, he needs a  big money, so he asked his parents to give him a money. but they didn't. So he get upset and killed them.

So family always take care of each other and consider themselves.

1. be + ing 일때 be 동사 잊지말기.
2. 단수형일때 s로 동수 단수표시 해주기!
3. 부모는 복수형이 기본.
4. a lot of 복수 
5. there are a lot !!!!! 몇번째니!!
6. and는 나열하는 것 마지막에만 써줌. 

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