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Recently, korea trough confusing time. Because korean president and her friends broke our system and law for making their wealth.

A few year ago there is a rumer about president, one of her entouage do illigal things using her power. But blue house deny all suspect. so it was left just rumer. But a month ago there is a rumer about a woman who is daughter of president's best friend. she entered university illegal. so that the president student were very angry, because as many people know korea stuent struggle to entered good university so we thought enter university way have fare no matter what they are rich or not. and   a news program broadcast about the rumer about president get her best friend who named choi soon sil secret document and it's known all document confirmed from choi not advice. It means we select president park but run goverment from choi. 

And still every day we have a new news about them.

Till now, we know, choi and her friends are using the president's power make a useless project that cost a lot for they get the project and take a money. plus they force to get money from cheabol using foundation that they made. so that over 1,000,000,000,000 won money disappear to their pocket. for many year, cheabol said we dont have much money so that we can not hire more employee and can not pay more. but each of them paid over 7,000,0000,000 to them.

For many years, normal korean's life is going bad to worse. and many of rich and manager of goverment office are thought their a high class so look popluace so that they speak many bullshit things like 'populace are dog or pig'. so we are getting fed up all of them. but we stand becasue each of korean having a hard time and stand thire life. so we kick them out and ignore them. but the president's story made all korean go crazy. so we go to square and shout back out of the goverment things and take a invastigation. 

Correct (2016.11.13)

korean retiste news

Recently, Korea went through confusing time. Because Korean president and her friends broke our system and law for corruption.

Few years ago, there was a rumor about the president, one of her entourage did illegal things using her power. But blue house denied all accusations. So nothing happened. But a month ago there was a rumor about a woman who is  a daughter of the president's best friend. She entered university illegally. So that the university students were very angry, because as many people know Korean students struggle to entered good university so we thought entering university should be fair no matter even if they are rich or not. And  a news program broadcast about the rumor that the president sent a secret document to her best friend's email whose name is Choi Soon Sil that should not be brought outside the blue house. It means we selected president park but Choi runs our government.

And still every day we have new news about them.

Till now, we know, Choi and her friends are using the president's power to make a useless project that cost a lot so that they can get money from that. And also they force to get money from Cheabol using foundation that they made. So more than 1,000,000,000,000 won disappear to their pocket. For many years, Cheabol said we dont have much money so that we can not hire more employees and can not pay more. but each of them paid over 7,000,0000,000 won to them.

For many years, normal korean's life is going bad to worse. And many of rich and manager of goverment offices  think that they're  high class so they look down to ordinary peope and say many bullshit things like 'populace are dog or pig'. So we are getting fed up if all of them. But we stand because each of Korean's having a hard time of their life. So we kick them out and ignore them. but the president's story made all Koreans go crazy. So we went to square and shout back out of the government things and take an investigation.

1. 나라이름 첫 자는 대문자.
2. 과거에 일어난건 과거형으로!! 
3. 글쓰때 정신차리자 실수가 하나둘이 아니다.
4. 1개 이상이면 항상 a를 쓰지 않음. 
5.  rumer -> rumor 철자 주의!! 잘 외우자!!!
6. approval : 승인
7.  senator : 평의원
8.  acusation : 시치미 때다. 
9.  entouage : 측근 
10. corruption : 부패

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