[전화영어 영작수업] korea education

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Korea education

Korea is well-known as a high education country. it's true. Korean study a lot. and there is many private academy for kids and adult. because Korea society demand useless education license to student and works. 

For example, we need a TOEIC score to get a job. even if that job don't use any word in English. so that many Korean learn English very board way that is decomposing sentence and practicing how to find out correct answer. that's why many korean sick of learning english. and we can not speak english even if we study very long time. 

and there is a word to explain student who called themselves don't want to study maths is '수포자(supoja)'. because of they are sick of maths. it's same reason with english study.

But high education atmosphere is not always bad. 

because of it, after world-war and korea-war korea re-build country very short time. even if korea don't have any technology and resource.

So i think, this is a time to make a change. because we get through hard day with high education, but now we face side effect from it. solving is hard, but we need it to get better society.

Correct (2016.09.12)

Korea education

Korea is well-known as a high education country. It's true. Korean study a lot. And there are many private academies for kids and adult. Because Korean society demands useless education license to students and employees. 

For example, we need a TOEIC score to get a job. Even if those jobs don't use any word in English. So that many Korean learn English in a very boring way that is decomposing sentences and practicing how to find out correct answer. That's why many Korean are sick of learning English. And we can't speak english even if we study for a very long time. There is a word for students who don't want to study Math. That is '수포자(supoja)'. Because they are sick of Math. It's the same reason with english study.

But high education atmosphere is not always bad. 

Because of it, after world-war and Korea-war, Korea re-built the country in a very short time. Even if Korea doesn't have any technology and resources.

So i think, this is a time to make a change. Because we get through hard days with high education, but now we face bad effect from it. solving is hard, but we need it to have a better society.

1.  문장의 시작은 대문자로 써야함
2.  Many를 쓰면 뒤에 복수명사가 와야함.
3.  do(n't)와 dose(n't)를 쓸대 주어와 수 주의하기!
4. 과목이나 나라이름의 첫글자는 대문자
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6. 새로운 주제를 나타날때는 and등 접속사 필요없음

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