[전화영어 영작숙제] LGBT (Lesbian Gay Bisexual Transgender)

동성애와 양성애 성전환자에 관한 주제를 받아 작문하였습니다.
전에 많은 성전환자분들이 화류계에서 일한다는 걸 보고 단어를 구글에서 검색해보았습니다.
demimonde (화류계, 데미몬ㄷ) 라는 단어를 새로 알게 되었습니다.
추석 연휴 동안 긴 시간이 있었지만, 역시 과제는 당일이나 전날에 몰아서 하는 것이 정석인가 봅니다.

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LGBT  

I heard LGBT is not a phychosis and they born to love same gender. So we need to repect their love. But there is many prejudice so that many LGBT have a problem make their real life.

one of the problem is marry. some of them marry that person is not LGBT for hiding that they are one of them. After married, they are cheating their husbands and wives and make a relationship with them. After their husbands and wives are known, their really shocked and  exprience metal breaking.

the other problem is venereal-disease from relationship with same gender. ADIS is well-known disease from it.

As i know, some of transgender and lesbian suffered from financial problem. because of low income and hard to get a job. many of countrys are paid woman's income lower then man's and many of comopanys don't want to hire Transgender so many transgender work in  the demimonde.

Solving those problem we need a long time.
Normal person need to tring to understand them and respect them, LGBT need to do not make a victem who are from marrige.

Correct (2016.09.19)

LGBT  

I heard LGBT is not a psychosis and they are born to love the same gender. So we need to respect their love. But there are many prejudice so that many LGBT have a problem with their life.

One of the problem is getting married. Some of them marry someone to hide that they are one of the LGBTs. After they got married, they are cheating their husbands and wives and have a relationship with same sex. After their husbands and wives found out, they're really shocked and experience metal breakdown.

The other problem is venereal-disease when they have sexual contact with the same gender. AIDS is well-known disease of it.

As i know, some of transgender and lesbian suffered from financial problem. Because of low income and hard to get a job. Many countries pay women's income lower then men's and many companies don't want to hire Transgender so many transgender work in night clubs.

To solve those problems, we need a long time.
Normal person needs to try to understand them and respect them, LGBT should get married if they will not tell the truth to their partners.

1. psychosis : 정신병 
2. be동사 잊지말기!
3. there are many 
4. venereal-disease ( 성병 ) ,  sexually transmitted disese  (STD)  , STD가 더 많이 쓰임.
5. 스펠링 주의!!
6. LGBT는 커뮤터니를 의미 하기 때문에 
7. 마침표뒤에 대문자
8. 현제에 대해 말할땐 과거 시제 쓰지말것.

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